I’ve had quite a struggle with it. I’ll talk more on that later in a post which I plan to entitle “Trusting Your Gut Instinct.” I’ve redrafted the story from different points of view and deleted entire scenes and restructured it. The story has always been the one I wanted to tell. It was just the manner of telling it that complicated matters.
One thing’s for sure. I combed that manuscript multiple times for all manner of typo and yet, only after it was submitted did I see one missed return, one use of double word, and a seriously messed up set of commas (due to the fact that I’d deleted words from a sentence but forgotten to rearrange the commas). This experience has taught me a lot in microcosm of how it will doubtless be on a larger work of fiction (only magnified that much more).
The first line reads: I never expected to pull a mystery out of a self-addressed stamped envelope.
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As of this writing, there are over 60 Jane Austen-inspired stories to read and enjoy. I’ve read almost all of them and noticed that there is a huge variety of both genre, style and influence. The creativity is truly amazing!